Synopsis Hell

I'm sorry I haven't posted in almost two weeks, but there have been a lot of little problems. And of course they all come at once. Life would simply be boring if it didn't happen that way. But, alas I'm back.

The title says it all. As I'm doing some final editing on The Doves Cove Murders (was Spirit Writer), I'm also beginning the vicious process of drafting my synopsis.

I have written a synopsis once before, and seeing as how that one at the very least got me a request of my full WIP-I must have done something right (I think). So I figured I'd post how I go about writing up a synopsis. This isn't going to work for everyone. I don't have the perfect formula for doing this.

It's all about condensing your story. (And it's a royal pain in the butt. Yet, when you have the finished product, it's well worth the effort!) The only way I can condense a 55K story into a two page synopsis (or whatever the requirements are for each publisher/editor/agent) is to do it in baby steps.

'So, I'll have to rewrite this darn thing several times?' you say? You bet you will. All I do is take each scene and write one sentence describing what's going on. Can't do just one? That's fine. Do two sentences, but no more than that or you'll be in editing hell instead. (Keep in mind you'll have to take this and condense it even more!). Go through your entire story writing down these sentences.

Once you're done, you do NOT get to string the sentences together and call it a synopsis. Unless you are real good at doing this, please don't string them together just yet.

Now, set that all aside. Breathe. Enjoy the sun. Then, back to work. This step you can do first before going through your story and writing those sentences, but I prefer to do it after. The first paragraph is going to be the PUNCH! Or the hook. You need to hook them in to read your story. This is the log line-your entire story rolled into 25 to 30 words. LOL! I know-impossible! But, with a little work it is possible. I guess that's a bit intimidating. I look at it like the blurb for your story. That's easier to wrap my head around at least.

Once you have that polished, it's onto your sentences you set aside. Ugh! I know. Read through it once WITHOUT making any corrections. You'll be able to pick out the important key parts needed. On the second read through, grab your pen, pencil, marker, etc (I prefer a red pen) and cross out the unimportant parts. You need to have the key points of your story. Think of them as the cause and effect points of your story. You don't want secondary characters (unless they pertain to the main plot and then you don't usually use their names) or any subplots. Another way to think of this: ACTION, REACTION, DECISION. This leads up to the climax. Remember, you're not throwing these sentences together. You have to weave them so they flow naturally and logically. Same goes for your paragraphs.

Now comes the ending. DO NOT leave them hanging. Tell what happens at the end. This is where you have the crisis-the black moment-when everything appears as if it's all about to come tumbling down. And of course the resolution and HEA. Be sure you have all loose ends tied up at the end.

Done? Okay, again breathe. Enjoy the sun. Now, you have to polish this the same as you have polished your story. UGH! I know, but it has to be done, like it or not.

A couple of last tips:

1) Write in the present tense.

2) Pay attention to what the publisher/editor/agent's requirements are on the length of the synopsis.

3) Avoid the passive voice

4) BREATHE! And have fun writing it. You should be excited about your story and if that is in fact the case, it will show in your writing. :)

A Break

With all the crazy editing I've been doing, I've decided I needed a much deserved 30 minute break. So, I went on over to Facebook and cracked up. My awesome cousin sent me to a link and read a blog making me nearly keel over. Here is the link:

http://thebloggess.com/2011/06/and-thats-why-you-should-learn-to-pick-your-battles/

It makes me want to go out and do something along the same line. I couldn't help but to share this with you all as I'm sure you're in need of a quick break and a laugh.
Thanks Laura for sharing with me.

Enjoy ;)

Bundle of Nerves

Savvy Authors are kicking off pitches today, and I am a bundle of nerves. I'm finding that I'm questioning my three line pitch constantly. I didn't get enough sleep last night. I'm a complete mess and the pitches go on for the rest of the month. *Sigh*

Now I see what my fellow writers are talking about. The frustration. The second guessing. The comparing of yours to others. By the end of this, I may just need a straight jacket, lol.

Seriously, I believe this is going to be a fun ride. Stressful, but fun. If I didn't have any stress, I'd be bored :)

My head is held high knowing I've done my absolute best. A special thanks to two of my twinkies, Mel and Ally, who helped me brainstorm my pitch. You girls are simply awesome.

Here goes! Wish me luck.

Editing Craziness

Yesterday was the last day for the June Revision Hell. And am I done?

Nope.

I am up to Chapter Six. I don't want to rush through this as I want it to be good.

And after all, pitching doesn't begin until July 7th. So that should give me a little more time. The editing is moving faster now that I'm done struggling through the first two chapters. Four more to go, give or take. I'm considering making my chapters a bit shorter on the page count.

Anyone else pitching this month over at Savvy Authors? If you're interested, here is the link: http://www.savvyauthors.com/vb/showevent.php?eventid=1029

Have a great and safe 4th of July! And remember to think of our troops at home and overseas :)